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Are you selling vitamins or painkillers?

How you position your product is everything.

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Welcome to the 56th issue of Write On!

The newsletter that is already counting the days until next football season 🥲

In today’s issue I’ll be covering:

  • The latest marketing science in your inbox

  • Vitamins vs. Painkillers

  • Top finds this week, including a simple psychology trick for building a writing habit that sticks

Estimated read time: 2 minutes 11 seconds

The latest marketing science in your inbox

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Vitamins vs. Painkillers:

A big focus of mine for this year is getting back to the basics.

Flashy ideas and trends will always try to distract you, but the fundamentals of copywriting rarely change.

One of the most important copywriting concepts you should understand is the difference between vitamins and painkillers.

Because it doesn’t matter what you’re selling.

It matters how you position what you’re selling.

You’re either selling vitamins or painkillers:

Vitamin or Pain Killer

So what’s the difference?

Vitamins provide long-term benefits, general improvements, or enhancements to the customer's life.

Painkillers address a specific pain point or problem for the customer. They provide an immediate or short-term solution to alleviate the customer's discomfort or inconvenience.

Both provide value to the customer, but one technique is more effective.

Painkillers.

Let me explain with an example.

Vitamin vs. Painkiller Example:

The product we’re selling: Golf lessons

Most companies write their copy like they’re selling vitamins. Like this:

"Unlock your full potential on the golf course with our expert guidance. Our comprehensive program helps you develop a consistently better golf game, leading to long-term improvement, increased enjoyment, and the confidence to tackle any course."

- Vitamins

It doesn’t sound too bad on the surface, right?

The thing is… it can be way better.

Here’s how copywriting experts position their products as painkillers:

"Struggling with inconsistent swings ruining your golf game? Our proven techniques will instantly correct your swing, allowing you to shave strokes off your score and finally beat your buddies on the course."

- Painkillers

Same promise →→ Better golf game

Different positioning.

Can you feel the difference?

The painkiller version exaggerates the pain points and then presents the desired solution:

  • Pain: You’re bad at golf

  • Desire: Beat your friends

💥 How to take action: Before you publish anything, ask yourself: “Is my copy selling vitamins or painkillers?”

Top Finds This Week:

📖 Storytelling: 10 mistakes that are killing your story (and how to avoid them): (link)

💪 Writing Exercise: A simple psychology trick for building a writing habit that sticks: (link)

🖼 Frameworks: Simple storytelling framework — Start with I, End with YOU: (link)

📜 Principles: The easiest writing upgrade you can make: (link)

✍️ Write On: How Spotify sells with emotion: (link)

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That’s all for this week! See you next Wednesday.

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