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Are you selling vitamins or painkillers?

How to position your product like a copywriting pro.

Welcome to the 14th issue of Write On!

The newsletter that doesn’t charge you extra for guac.

Estimated read time: 1 minute, 42 seconds

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Vitamins vs. Painkillers

It doesn’t matter what you’re selling.

It matters how you position what you’re selling.

You’re either selling vitamins or painkillers:

Vitamin or Pain Killer

So what’s the difference?

Vitamins provide long-term benefits, general improvements, or enhancements to the customer's life.

Painkillers address a specific pain point or problem for the customer. They provide an immediate or short-term solution to alleviate the customer's discomfort or inconvenience.

Both provide value to the customer, but one technique is more effective.

Painkillers.

Let me explain with an example.

Vitamin vs. Painkiller Example:

The product we’re selling: Golf lessons

Most companies write their copy like they’re selling vitamins. Like this:

"Unlock your full potential on the golf course with our expert guidance. Our comprehensive program helps you develop a consistently better golf game, leading to long-term improvement, increased enjoyment, and the confidence to tackle any course."

- Vitamins

It doesn’t sound too bad on the surface, right?

The thing is… it can be way better.

Here’s how experts position their products as painkillers:

"Struggling with inconsistent swings ruining your golf game? Our proven techniques will instantly correct your swing, allowing you to shave strokes off your score and finally beat your buddies on the course."

- Painkillers

Same promise (better golf game).

Different positioning.

Can you feel the difference?

The painkiller version exaggerates the pain points and then presents the desired solution:

  • Pain: You’re bad at golf

  • Desire: Beat your friends

💡 Bottom line: Before you publish anything, ask yourself: “Am I selling vitamins or painkillers?”

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That’s all for this week. Thanks for reading.

See you next Wednesday!

Joe

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